3 Goals

1. I want to be able to transfer my ideas form my head to the paper better.  I found last year when I was writing I had some trouble getting some good ideas down in simple coherent sentences and I found myself asking other people or my teacher for help way to often.

2. I tend to over use words when I write so I want to enhance my verbs and nouns ect. when i write.  And also better my choice of words when I write.

3. I want my conclusions and intros to be stronger i have always felt that was something I was weak in. Writing intros are difficult for me and in conclusions I tend to use to many repetitive words.(see # 2)