what she thought

My first goal is to find out who people will vote for and the secondary goal is to find out why they are voting for that particular person.  I will try to clear that up and go over my research proposal until i feel it is good.  Also i will have other people read my proposal and get feed back from them as well.  The caps to no caps was me just not proof reading the proposal as well i should have.  And its a combination of the Young Republicans  and just young republicans in general.

I got good feed back from my draft.  There were many things i can improve on... i will probably leave it for a while so i can go back and make it into a better draft.  She gave me some good ideas in teh interview and many more things i can improve on in my actual paper.  I though it was a good thing to do to get feedback from the teacher.