what they thought

i felt the the feed back i got on my essay was very helpful from my class mates.  it was different but very good because i have never done feedback where you told the writer what thought you were trying to convey. there were a lot of helpful things i put into my essay and i think people become better writers when they review their peers work.  i liked the fact that it was in letter format because it made the feedback more personal and showed that the person really read and critiqued the essay.  i felt i got my point across because the reader picked up what i was concentrating on which was an equal view of both candidates.  i think it is a great way to give and get feed back because you can see what your class mates think about your work and get a feel for their views on it